The change I made from my rough draft to my final draft was adding details about my characters feeling of taking the exam, getting the answers and such. I added these to the Part 3 which I had forgotten to do.
The peer review checklist helped me the most for sure. I help get my big errors and small errors out of my paper. The writer feedback helped my the least, but the adult checklist helped me improve the flow of my sentences. I had both of my parents look over it.
I feel my writing will improve both with lots of practice. I feel in years past the teachers I've had do not focus on writing enough, and I feel like it is one of my weak points in english.
I think I most room to grow in stating my ideas. I feel like I have good ideas I just can never seem to say them in ways that make sense. My goal is to feel like I have less of a struggle saying my ideas on paper, and I think that is a goal I can accomplish.
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